Sep 20, 2010

The perfect wedding..

"What's the furthest distance for you?" He asked. The time was 1 minute after the silence when she announced a break-up.

"The furthest distance is when I'm sitting close to you..." She finished her drink, ".. but I'm not loving you anymore.. "

He looked at her.

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(1)

She's a famous wedding planner, but yet to have any plan of 'The Perfect Wedding' for her clients.

He's a famous wedding planner, but yet to reveal his plan of 'The Perfect Wedding' to any of his clients.

She knows she needs to have 'The Perfect Wedding' planned-out. Sir Gomez, her current biggest client gave him 2 years time to lay out the plan -- 2 years -- "sufficient enough", she smirked with a plot drafted in her mind.

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(2)

They fell in love -- I mean, she made him fell for her, and when the night he kneed down with a ring and made his proposal, she knew she's almost there.

-- What's 'The Perfect Wedding' for the best wedding planner in the world? His own wedding.

That night, in front of the kneeing him, she nodded to the proposal, but smiled to the victory of her plot..

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(3)

He started to plan his wedding -- the perfect wedding of him and his love. She's totally overwhelmed by the wonderful idea -- the plan of The Perfect Wedding is so gorgeous and flawless she just have to admit his status of the world's best wedding planner.

She rewrote every details of the plan to Sir Gomez in her email. "..only a heart that's deeply in love can create this perfect wedding plan..." Sir Gomez commented in his reply -- she almost can see Sir Gomez's smilling. She knew Sir Gomez was so impressed -- every words in Sir Gomez's replies carried emotions and expressions, she could feel that Sir Gomez was the happiest client on the planet, without the necessary of meeting him at all.

She smirked at Sir Gomez's comment, while thinking of the earliest date to dump his wedding planner fiance.

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He looked at her. The heartless silence conquered every drop of air in between them.

"I used to think that, " he broke the silence, "the furthest distance is when I'm standing in front of you, but you don't know how much I miss you, and how much I love you..."

She took off her engagement ring, put it on the table, "I'm sorry," stood up, grabbed her handbag, "..it's over." cold-hearted, headed towards the exit of the coffee house.

"..but in the last 2 years I realize that, " he continued, "the furthest distance exists when you know how much I miss you and how much I love you, but you just pretend to do the same, for some reasons other than love..."

She stopped. Turned around to him.

"... the perfect wedding plan is not yet complete," he looked at her, his eye filled with disappointment, "it requires a heart that is deeply in love..."

Her handbag slipped off of her hand. A hopeless weakness smeared from her feet, upward.

".. the furthest distance, " he stood up, "is even though we have been together for almost 2 years, you still don't know who am I -- that's the furthest distance -- " he walked pass her,

"-- ever..."


28 comments:

awesome blossom said...

mind blowing.
i want to cry.

Unknown said...

thanks Fatma.. though it;s not supposed to be a heart-breaking post.. .. haha.. (it's a perfect wedding that full-filled my mind... :p )

Shunza said...

how could u be so heartless~~

hey the world's best wedding planner must be very handsome with a pair of sad blue eye, kan?

let me love him..

Nadewas said...

abe! u are such a novelist! I love reading this! keep em coming ok! miss you much!

Claire said...

Spidey.... Ko bt aku nanges bc ni.... :'(

Aiman (FB) said...

dun.. hmmm... dah 3 orng dah complain pasal nangis..

SpidEy d'lEfty said...

Shunzal!! Glad to have u back here.. !!

Nawal.. thanks. How's ur resolution check list on going? fashion designer? hmm.. great!

Claire Marie (FB) said...

Aku nak quote few sentence from ur perfect wedding s my stat... I want someone to read it...can i?

Unknown said...

[superlike!!!]... u made me cry tooo!!! uhukk...

SpidEy d'lEfty said...

Claire: I'm humbled.. it's my honor.. thanks.

Nazira: Thanks.. (apsal smue orng menangis nih??)

dayang (FB) said...

as usual....sangat suka..
1st: sebab gamba pokok dan daun itu.....
2nd: sgt paham...

Aiman lefty Hakimi (FB) said...

dayang, thanks. 2nd reason tu "sgt paham" means "terase"? Huhu.. sgt paham... ouch.

KakYus (FB) said...

..for me, it's because of this...

"is even though we have been together for almost 2 years, you still don't know who am I -- that's the furthest distance -- " he walked pass her,"

some how sgt terasa dgn statement tu.

Kak Z (FB) said...

huhu, yus.. some how akak paham apa yg yus terase itu..
n pd akak lak, really luv this quote
"..only a heart that's deeply in love can create this perfect wedding plan..." perfect!!! :P

Aiman lefty Hakimi (FB) said...

pengsan! ade yg terase ker?hmmm.....

Tita (FB) said...

‎:) i thank god she is not a a marriage counselor as well , else that guy will forever be a test subject
this is my first time reading this genre of your writing . good job! errr from personal experience ka?!

KakYus (FB) said...

Yeah..7 yrs..sometimes I wonder my self.

Dila said...

Kak Yus! 7 yrs? wow.. saya kalau setahun pun dah tak larat nak layan.. communication & confrontation tu penting kan dlm relationship? jgn lari dr masalah and jgn try wat assumption sendiri.. tak paham, tanye, maklum lah women are from venus and men are from mars.. hehe.. saje je nak nyebok!

Maniza (FB) said...

yes..always remember that it is always god will that have arranged all this...we just an actor acting in it..it's such a painful things to know that the person we assume we knew them the best change in a blink..things happen for reason..a very specific one.

Fariz said...

nak kena nangis dulu baru boleh komen ke?

Shahrina (FB) said...

Erk.. How come ahh i dont undrstnd tis story? Mcm doesnt make sense jer..

Unknown said...

Hahah.. kak ina, mmng my story NEVER make sense..

Angah, ngade2 la lu.

Tess, sorry if this post reminded u sth painful.. :(

fariz said...

kalau dalam cerita hindustan, kalau nama pun dah cinta sejati.. mmg takkan lepaskan punyalah... no matter how great the excuse is...

DF said...

eh... apsal org sume nangis tp aku kuar hingus nieh... ishh..
ps: saya tak paham encik... maap

Cheer said...

Bro, Really great + romance story. Like it so much !! It's touch ~

dikazzz said...

every words in Aiman's posts, carried emotions and expressions... =D

Wan Nurul Atiqah said...

good job abang aiman =)

im your fan, remember that!

Unknown said...

Kaikang PSTM

GOOD JOB ABG AIMAN

IM YOUR BIGGEST FAN EVER... :p